WARNING WARNING!LONG CRITIQUE WARNING!!READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!
First,all Sunny here (the grammar nazi >.< Oopsie,possibly offensive ) just says you wrote Ketch instead of Sketch.ONWARDS WITH THE TASK!
It's a bit hard to see but here we go!
I love it,the details are beautiful (ruffling,anatomy,etc.) one thing is,I am not sure if you know that Kia's ears are see-through so you can see Nikka's face >.< Nikka's expressions is ADORABLE all content and kitty-like.Her pigtails...SO FLUFFY Kia's outfit is nicely done and the background really looks adorable.You're hands could use a bit of work (they are a bit chubby,not saying mine are any better >.<)Overall a wonderful job Magy-Chan!
Can't wait to see the finished product!
Hehe (; Okay, fixed that....
Thanks so much! Yes, I always work on every little detail in the sketch even if you can't see it in the finished product, it makes for a good result >w<
Thank you c: I went for the adorable kawaii look (hence the cute chubby hands)
But thanks so much for all the compliments! c: