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WARNING WARNING!LONG CRITIQUE WARNING!!READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

First,all Sunny here (the grammar nazi >.< Oopsie,possibly offensive :dummy:) just says you wrote Ketch instead of Sketch.ONWARDS WITH THE TASK!

It's a bit hard to see but here we go!
I love it,the details are beautiful (ruffling,anatomy,etc.) one thing is,I am not sure if you know that Kia's ears are see-through so you can see Nikka's face >.< Nikka's expressions is ADORABLE all content and kitty-like.Her pigtails...SO FLUFFY :iconcraiplz: Kia's outfit is nicely done and the background really looks adorable.You're hands could use a bit of work (they are a bit chubby,not saying mine are any better >.<)Overall a wonderful job Magy-Chan!

Can't wait to see the finished product!
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magiiipoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe (; Okay, fixed that....
:iconblushplz: Thanks so much! Yes, I always work on every little detail in the sketch even if you can't see it in the finished product, it makes for a good result >w<
Thank you c: I went for the adorable kawaii look (hence the cute chubby hands)
But thanks so much for all the compliments! c:
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so welcome for the compliments because you deserve it!!You rock Magy-Chan (\(^.^)/) :dummy: :la: :tighthug:
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magiiipoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoeblushplz: :iconohstopityouplz:
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I ain't stopping until you stop being good!
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magiiipoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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dahhda you're too nice to me
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am just honest :D
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magiiipoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Sunnimi Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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